Gutpunching give/take/trade

Gutpunching Authors Corner

Softbellyj (1)

2021-07-15 오후 6:50

Only softbelly's like mine I was asked will I lay flat on a Matt close my eyes and let a 220lb body jump up in the air and ball up in to a ball and Land directly onto the belly?

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StrikeFighter (77 )

2021-07-12 오후 1:28

Thanks Admin for the helpful hint! :)

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Admin

2021-07-11 오전 12:03

You can post your cyber stories on https://www.chatfighters.com/stories
Or combine them to full books: https://www.chatfighters.com/books

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SammyBoy (20 )

2021-07-11 오후 6:38

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Good to know.

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Aedsal (0)

2021-07-10 오후 8:08

I would join a discord for this!

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slimp (0)

2021-07-09 오전 4:23

The Discord server has a limit on the length of text that can be posted at one time, I think a couple hundred words. There might be links off the server that allow for larger postings, but I haven't looked for them. Threads right here can go on forever though.

Role play is a form of authorship, and I think it'd be fun to build on each other's stories too. My passion in story writing or role play is to be the one receiving gut punishment. I like being the kind of character that really deserves pain and humiliation. I'll be the villain who everyone wants to see gutpunched. I can imagine being interrogated, with a gutpunch to follow every answer.

Here's a bit I wrote recently:

My role is a narcissistic, arrogant, cowardly bad guy. Somehow I end up being kidnapped and taken to a room with a bunch of guys hanging around, along with several "victims" of my bad behavior. This "audience" of victims includes those who I knew wouldn't fight back if I bullied, cheated or made fun of them. I screwed these people over because I felt superior to them. I look around the room and realize I'm in deep shit, but I try smarting off and demanding to be let go anyway. My captors then begin verbally abusing and humiliating me while shoving me around between them. Then they rip my shirt open take turns gutpunching me. While I'm being repeatedly doubled over with gutpunches, my victims are laughing and cheering.

Then after the gut punches weaken my muscles (not that they were terribly strong to begin with - being arrogant and cocky, but too lazy to work out), my arms are restrained and people in the "audience" are invited have a turn at my gut. Finally, when it looks like I'm about to pass out, the guy lets go of my arms and I drop to the floor. I get pulled onto my back, and a guy stands over me and says "you had enough?" As soon as I try to answer, he steps on my gut. I let out a hoarse grunt while people chuckle. "What's that?" "Try again!" So I try talking, and again his foot forces the wind out of me.

I hear someone say, "lay off him now!. Internal damage would be evidence of what happened here tonight." "As long as he doesn't need hospitalization, it won't do him any good to try and report the fun we had with him this evening. It's good we all have someone who'll say we were with them all evening." Then they all leave. I keep laying on the floor for several hours, then try sitting up, but realize I can't because my abs are too messed up. I roll over on to hands and knees, and struggle up from there. It's daylight, and I realize I'm in an old gas station on a two lane highway, with no traffic or other buildings in sight. I can't close my shirt because all the buttons are gone. I notice that even though I'm sore as hell, there is no longer any redness on my abs. No bruises either. I guess my abs are just weak enough to absorb impact without leaving any bruises. I end up walking all day, and finally get back to town after dark.

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Stomach Gutpunch (1)

2021-07-14 오전 3:01

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Ufffffff....me encantan las historias de interrogatorios en el que golpean a un hombre en el estómago, una y otra vez....

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buddystl (45 )

2021-07-08 오후 9:19

I’m going to be writing some wrestling fiction soon that will have gp. I’d be interested

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Hyede (5)

2021-07-08 오전 12:16

When not trashing a set of abs in real life, some of us enjoy gutpunching vicariously through video, still images and the written word. Unfortunately, it seemed the latter most of those options is becoming difficult to find these days. What with videos by the hundreds in easy reach, who wants to sit at a keyboard and bang out a compelling story any more? Well I do for one and I used to write quite regularly for Admiral Luke's site. This art is becoming a bit of an endangered species though, as I haven't seen many new stories floating around out there. Perhaps I'm just looking on the wrong places or perhaps people really are shying away from the work of writing. I hope however to change that with this topic.

I would like a show of hands, who might be interested in joining me in creating an authors corner of sorts, probably on a Discord server, where we can RP and create stories in a central location and then share them with others, whether by posting here or publishing on other web pages?

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Stomach Gutpunch (1)

2021-07-14 오전 3:05

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Yo estoy dispuesto a compartir historias de puñetazos en el estómago. Es verdad que cada vez somos menos los que nos animamos a escribir éstas excitantes historias

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malegutpunching (14 )

2021-07-11 오전 3:16

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I like the idea of an author's corner and place to post stories that specifically focus on gut punching. Hopefully, the stories will read more authentic than some of the really unrealistic stories I've read in the past.

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Stomach Gutpunch (1)

2021-07-14 오전 3:08

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Totalmente de acuerdo. Si no recuerdo mal, a ti te gustaron 2 historias que publiqué en el pasado.....

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slimp (0)

2021-07-14 오전 5:29

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I've written several over the years, based on both fantasy and real experience. I used to take a lack of response to the stories personally, but then noticed that not many people do get responses. I think writers would be more encouraged if their stories received feedback.

It also might generate more interest and vicarious pleasure if specific individuals were named in the stories. For example, "his fists were a blur as he pummeled Slimp's gut..."

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dabbler1973 (17)

2021-07-09 오후 3:53

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I'm on chatfighters and I LOVE writing stories. I've written several under different names.

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slimp (0)

2021-07-10 오전 3:53

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I've seen a lot of "cyber fights" there, but very few stories. Since I'm only into receiving punishment, I have little interest in a competitive match.

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